Film Pitch

This is our initial plot of the story.We used Powtoon to make this as we thought it was a good idea to use the cartoons and text and other elements the website provides.

FEEDBACK:
After making our pitch we got feedback from our teachers to make sure the story is good enough to make a film opening about it. Mrs Georgiou said that the characters should not meet in the film opening due to how that will give too much of the story away.She saidthat that is the best thing to dowhich made us all think and we decided that we will listen to her and therefore changed the part of the pitch where they meet.

CHANGES:
We changed a lot from this and kept some of the things the same. We changed things such as the part where the plot says the characters meet because they do not meet. We all discussed that if they meet, it will give too much of the story away, therefore we should just introduce them and their lives, without them meeting.  However the part where the plot says they are the complete opposite is still the same, in fact that is our story. The two characters are from different backgrounds and their lifestyles are the complete opposite. The setting is partially right because they do not meet at school because that way they would have met already. Because we do not want them to meet yet we are going to film them in their own area, if not house. The target audience is also right because we are targeting our film opening to girls aged 15 and over. However we might have some males in the audience due to how couples might watch it too.